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The MRT Hero

捷运英雄提示

请根据以下四张连环图画的内容，以 "Two days ago, an elderly man and a businessman got on a train..." 开头，写一篇约 120 个单词的文章，描述图中主角所经历的事件，并提供合理的解释与结局。

写作小栈

1. 看图作文在于描述图片的内容，也就是图中人物（包括脸部表情、情绪、穿着、人物互动等）、时间、地点和事件等信息的细节串连起来描写或叙述，一般会以下列两种方式来呈现：

＊描述文（deion）→ 根据提示或图中的主角命名，以第三人称的观点来描述或解读图片的内容。

＊叙述文（narration）→ 笔者本身融入图中其中一个角色，用第一人称的观点来叙述故事情节。

2. 不管采取描述文或叙述文，都记得运用想象力和逻辑思考先构思出一个合理的剧情，重点分明，有开头、发展、结尾，以求故事情节前后连贯。

3. 善用转折语来串连每张图之间的关系或发展，方能写出流畅的看图说故事，而非天马行空的跳跃式描述或叙述。再者，随着故事发展，可对图中人物的情绪变化多加着墨，让文章内容更丰富、更具可看性。

构思方向

检视图片后，以描述文来解读图片内容，构思出以下剧情：

一名商人和一位老先生搭上捷运，商人张望是否有空位可让老先生坐，但是却没有。 → 这名商人看到一位坐在博爱座上的男孩正听着音乐，没有注意到身边的老先生。 → 商人有些生气，拍着男孩的肩膀并指着博爱座的标志。 → 男孩尴尬地起身让坐，车厢上的人都为这名商人给予掌声。

故事结尾则以人人都为这名商人报以热烈掌声作结。

动动脑（Brainstorming）

故事设定 主 题 A businessman becomes an MRT hero.

时 地 Two days ago, on the MRT

人 物 A businessman, an elderly man, a young boy, and many MRT passengers

写作大纲

引导句 Two days ago, an elderly man and a businessman got on a train at the Taipei City Hall MRT station.

发展句 图一 The elderly man moved very slowly and looked like he was in pain.

图二 While looking around, the businessman spotted a young boy sitting in one of the dark blue priority seats.

图三 A little angry, the businessman tapped the boy on the shoulder and pointed to the priority seat sign.

图四 Seeing this, people gave the businessman a big round of applause.

结论句 This incident taught everyone in that particular car a lesson, especially the young boy.

范文

Two days ago, an elderly man and a businessman got on a train at the Taipei City Hall MRT station. The elderly man moved very slowly and looked like he was in pain. The businessmen felt sorry for him and looked around to see if any seats were available, but there were none.

While he was looking around, the businessman spotted a young boy sitting in one of the dark blue priority seats. The boy had headphones on and was playing video games on his phone, so he didn't notice the elderly man standing near him or yield his seat. A little angry, the businessman tapped the boy on the shoulder and pointed to the priority seat sign. The boy was so surprised and embarrassed that he got up immediately. Then, the elderly man sat down and thanked the businessman. Seeing this, people gave the businessman a big round of applause. This incident taught everyone in that particular MRT car a lesson, especially the young boy.

A little angry, the businessman tapped the boy on the shoulder...

两天前，一位老先生和一名商人在捷运市政府站上车。老人走得很缓慢，看似非常痛苦的样子。这名商人为他感到难过，他环顾四周看看是否有空位，但却一个位子也没有。

正当这名商人左右张望的同时，他发现一个小男孩坐在其中一个深蓝色博爱座上。男孩戴着耳机用手机打电动，所以他没有注意到站在他身边的老先生，也没让出他的座位。这名商人有点生气，他轻轻拍了男孩的肩膀并指着博爱座的标志。男孩感到既惊讶又尴尬，因此他马上起身。接着，老先生便坐下并向这名商人道谢。众人见状便对这名商人报以热烈的掌声。这起事件让这节车厢内的每个人都上了一课，尤其是那个小男孩。